Sunday, May 19, 2013

What Happens At Home Part 1


            It never seemed to work out for her. The men in her life always want to either get in her pants or steal her work. Coworkers were never just coworkers anymore; they always made themselves into more and it irked her to no end. Eleanor ran a hand through her strawberry-blonde hair in annoyance. Why couldn't she find a job where she could work at home? It would solve all her problems.
            She continued to type as she snuck a glance at the clock above the door to her boss’s office. It was nearly time for her to clock out; for her to go home and read that new novel that she bought earlier in the week and drink a nice warm cup of hot cocoa.  

6 comments:

  1. Sounds like she needs a change. Great insight to her life in this snippet.

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  2. That would irk me too at work. The poor gal needs a change, which I bet is where you're going. :)

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  3. Gives a lot of insight into the character in a short excerpt...well done!

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  4. Definitely sounds like it's time for a major life change. Interesting snippet.

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  5. List of things to do: find new job. ASAP. Been there, done that. Great snippet!

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